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The sky turns grey
Such a beautiful day
The clouds begins to speak
As rain kisses my cheek

It falls slowly at first
It quenches Earth’s thirst
Down the window it falls
The magic of it calls

I see a wall of rain
It eases every pain
It smells wet and sweet
To my skin it is a treat
©2008 ~Padfoot-Pal
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It was rainy today so that's were this one came from. I LOVE the rain, so here is my love in words.
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=whydoidothiseveryday:iconwhydoidothiseveryday: May 13, 2008, 2:04:17 AM
beautiful, i am not too keen on rain myself but this is a gorgeous poem.
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~Padfoot-Pal:iconPadfoot-Pal: May 13, 2008, 6:44:49 AM
Thank you

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~Osari123:iconOsari123: May 15, 2008, 5:23:19 AM
Its awsome, I love it, Enchore, enchore, lol

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~Padfoot-Pal:iconPadfoot-Pal: May 15, 2008, 6:41:04 AM
Thank you Thank you I'll be here all week!! :P

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~Osari123:iconOsari123: May 15, 2008, 12:17:28 PM
lol

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Love is almost like getting run over by an 18 wheeler, IT HURTS LIKE HELL!!!!!!!!!!!